10:29 Jul 20, 2018 |
Spanish to English translations [PRO] Law/Patents - Other / Privacy Policy | |||||||
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4 +6 | (and for ) the use that is made of them… |
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(and for ) the use that is made of them… Explanation: [Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them and their protection. (Some users might prefer another version with an Oxford comma) [Organisation] is responsible for gathering your personal data, the use that is made of them, and their protection. NB: As this query is posted in the Spanish to English translation section, that is what I'm suggesting. For an explanation in Spanish of the sentence, it should be posted in the ES-ES section. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2018-07-20 10:41:46 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Some might also prefer "collecting" rather than "gathering"... but to me it's six of one and half a dozen of the other. |
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