Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
nos hiciera llegar su débil hálito luminoso
English translation:
so that the moon’s soft glow could shine down on us
Spanish term
United States
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nos hiciera llegar su débil hálito luminoso
Esa noche, perdida en los tiempos, en la que la naturaleza nos quiso acompañar a través de las estrellas, obligando a las nubes a retirarse unos instantes, para que la luna, cual antorcha, nos hiciera llegar su débil hálito luminoso en aquel momento tan triste de nuestras vidas.
Gracias,
Barbara
Sep 28, 2015 09:35: James A. Walsh Created KOG entry
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Spain
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Native in: English (Variants: Irish, US, UK) , Spanish (Variants: Latin American, Standard-Spain)
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so that the moon’s soft glow could shine down on us
“Esa noche, perdida en los tiempos, en la que la naturaleza nos quiso acompañar a través de las estrellas, obligando a las nubes a retirarse unos instantes, para que la luna, cual antorcha, nos hiciera llegar su débil hálito luminoso en aquel momento tan triste de nuestras vidas.”
“That night, as if lost in time, when the universe seemed to want to guide us with the stars, causing the clouds to retreat briefly, so that the moon’s soft glow could shine down on us at such a sad time in our lives.”
Or see alternative below.
...para que la luna, cual antorcha, nos hiciera llegar su débil hálito luminoso en aquel momento tan triste de nuestras vidas.
...so that the moon’s soft glow could illuminate us at such a sad time in our lives.
United States
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could reach us with its gentle gleaming breeze
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Richard Hill
: There's me overlooking the accent thinking it was the diminutive of halo
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LOL. Thanks Richard. :-)
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franglish
: ...with its gently luminous breeze
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Thanks franglish. :-)
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Germany
45 years experience
Native in: English (Variant: British)
Works in: German to English, French to English, Spanish to English, and 2 more.
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