en el desempeño del sector
English translation: [to achieve positive] sector performance
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|  Selected response from: Muriel Vasconcellos United States Local time: 20:15 | ||||||
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11 mins confidence: 
in the division's performance Explanation: About 38,700 results (0.80 seconds) Search Results The Case Against ROI Control - Harvard Business Review https://hbr.org/1969/05/the-case-against-roi-control ... be consistent with the capital investment decisions and any deviations from the capital investment estimates would be reflected in the division's performance. The Capital Asset Pricing Model - Page 37 - Google Books Result https://books.google.com/books?isbn=8776817121 change in the division's performance Plug into The Power. 37 The Capital Asset Pricing Model Capital Budgeting, Capital Structure and the CAPM. Portfolio Theory & Financial Analyses - Page 93 - Google Books Result https://books.google.com/books?isbn=8776816052 change in the division's performance The return equation for a four-factor APP conforms to the. 93 Portfolio Theory & Financial Analyses Capital Budgeting, ... [PDF]IAC 9/28/16 Insurance[191] - Iowa.gov https://www.legis.iowa.gov/docs/iac/chapter/03-29-2017.191.1... Iowa Code section 505.8, in the division's performance of the duties of the commissioner under Iowa. Code chapter 516E. “Division's Web site” shall mean the ... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2017-05-07 01:25:03 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- A synonym of "sector" is "division" and it is used as "sector's performance" more than 38,000 times in a Google search |
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54 mins confidence:
... positive performance results in the relevant sector Explanation: This is not so literal -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2017-05-07 02:14:00 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- English tends to use more compact chunks than Spanish. Often, a longer phrase in Spanish such as "resultados positivos (1) + en el desempeño (2) + del sector (3)" becomes more compact in English: "positive performance results (1) + in the relevant sector (2)" |
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1 hr confidence: peer agreement (net): +2
peer agreement (net): +2[to achieve positive] sector performance Explanation: In this context, 'results' seems unnecessary. Your document seems a bit wordy. This is the third question you've posted recently where I felt that one word would have been more effective than several. If you want to keep 'results', then your own answer is fine. |
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