Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Russian term or phrase:
В требовании о...Заказчик указывает
English translation:
(1) or better (3), not (2)
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Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
Dec 19, 2022 16:42
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Russian term
В требовании о...Заказчик указывает
Russian to English
Law/Patents
Law: Contract(s)
В требовании об устранении недостатков оказанных услуг Заказчик указывает выявленные недостатки и сроки для их устранения.
В требовании о соразмерном уменьшении стоимости услуг Исполнителя Заказчик указывает выявленные недостатки, дает расчет и обоснование уменьшения стоимости услуг Исполнителя.
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Меня интересует грамматика и построение фразы:
1) In its request....,the Customer shall indicate/specify/state the discovered defects (deficiencies)...
2) The Customer shall indicate/specify/state in its request....the discovered defects (deficiencies)...
3) The Customer’s request [for a proportionate reduction of the cost of the Contractor’s services] shall indicate/state/specify the discovered defects (deficiencies)
В требовании о соразмерном уменьшении стоимости услуг Исполнителя Заказчик указывает выявленные недостатки, дает расчет и обоснование уменьшения стоимости услуг Исполнителя.
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Меня интересует грамматика и построение фразы:
1) In its request....,the Customer shall indicate/specify/state the discovered defects (deficiencies)...
2) The Customer shall indicate/specify/state in its request....the discovered defects (deficiencies)...
3) The Customer’s request [for a proportionate reduction of the cost of the Contractor’s services] shall indicate/state/specify the discovered defects (deficiencies)
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 +1 | (1) or better (3), not (2) |
Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
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| 3 | (1) |
Pervane Kerimova
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Change log
Dec 24, 2022 09:35: Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D. Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
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Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
United States
United States
Native in English
Works in field
United States
On time, on target, on budget.
Native in: English 
, Polish
Works in: Polish to English, English to Polish, Russian to Polish, and 1 more.
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104
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(1) or better (3), not (2)
In (2) indicate/specify/state should be followed by the discovered defects, not in its request.
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Comment: "Thank you, Frank!"
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Pervane Kerimova
Azerbaijan
Azerbaijan
Specializes in field
Azerbaijan
Contracts & reports, legal documents, IT
Native in: Azerbaijani 
, Turkish
Works in: Turkish to Azerbaijani, Azerbaijani to Turkish, English to Azerbaijani, and 9 more.
Related KudoZ points
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4
(1)
You used the Passive voice in the (3). but I do not think it sounds good.
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